Description review

Business Development Executive - (German Language) -Remote - Part Time

Excelerate360 · United Kingdom · back to the listing

HR standards

60/100

needs work

Title ↔ description

80/100

solid

Reads as

Sales Representative

100% confident

What this role officially is

commercial sales representative — ESCO, the EU occupation classification

Commercial sales representatives represent a company in selling and providing information on goods and services to businesses and organisations.

Also known as: field sales representative, technical and commercial sales executive, field sales executive, sales and marketing consultant, business development representative, technical and commercial sales representative

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What the listing never says

  • 26 bullet points. Long requirement lists deter qualified candidates, who read them as hard gates. Scope clarity
  • No pay range published. Candidates cannot tell whether applying is worth their time. Pay transparency

The listing, marked up

Nothing in the wording of this listing tripped a check. The scores above still judge how complete and coherent it is.

This is a Part-Time Role

• Identifying new business opportunities and generating Sales Qualified Leads

• Delivering multi-channel outreach activity, including telephone calls, emails and LinkedIn messaging

• Managing the initial prospect relationship and securing qualified appointments

• Managing internal CRM processes (Salesforce), including input of activity, account data updates, market feedback and prospect lead qualification details.

• Measuring and recording day to day sales activity levels and performances

• Collaborate closely with the Enterprise Sales and/or Inside Sales teams.

• Learn, leverage and help evolve our lead qualification and sales processes.

• Meet/exceed monthly qualified leads quota to ensure pipeline objectives as directed.

Requirements

• Passionate for new business sales/prospecting

• Hard worker and willing to achieve a high volume of daily outbound activities while maintaining a positive and energetic attitude.

• Background in IT Saas Sales

• Experience in cold outreach, LinkedIn and new business prospecting

• Competitive, driven and a team player who is willing to succeed

• Software/technology aptitude, including CRM and sales engagement applications.

• Ability to work under pressure, organise and prioritise responsibilities

• The ability to think creatively and strategically

• Must speak German

• Must be able to work on a part-time basis

Benefits

• 21 Annual leave days in year 1, rising to 25 days (plus bank holidays)

• Christmas Closure

• Staff Benefits

• Ongoing expert training and support

• Opportunity for advancement

• We promote a growth culture

• Great fun, team environment

• Remote working optional

Originally posted on Himalayas

How this was produced

Highlights are found by rule, not by a model: each one is a phrase matched at a known position, and every note is a template we wrote. The two scores come from a typed-decision model (Jev) that reads the listing against the official role definition and real listings for the same role, and returns probabilities rather than prose — it never writes any of the words on this page, and never chooses what to highlight.

Deterministic penalty applied to the HR score: 8 points (from 68 before penalties). Reviewed 21 Sep 2026.