Description review

Health and Safety Manager

Scottish Government · Dundee, United Kingdom · back to the listing

HR standards

30/100

poor

Title ↔ description

89/100

strong

Reads as

Unclear

no confident match

What the listing never says

  • No section describes what the person would actually do. Scope clarity
  • No pay range published. Candidates cannot tell whether applying is worth their time. Pay transparency
  • No location or timezone policy stated, so a candidate cannot tell where they may work from. Scope clarity

The listing, marked up

Nothing in the wording of this listing tripped a check. The scores above still judge how complete and coherent it is.

Are you a qualified Health and Safety professional looking for a new opportunity? Would you like to play a key role in developing a health and safety management system across an organisation? If so, then this could be the perfect role for you.

How this was produced

Highlights are found by rule, not by a model: each one is a phrase matched at a known position, and every note is a template we wrote. The two scores come from a typed-decision model (Jev) that reads the listing against the official role definition and real listings for the same role, and returns probabilities rather than prose — it never writes any of the words on this page, and never chooses what to highlight.

Deterministic penalty applied to the HR score: 16 points (from 46 before penalties). Reviewed 22 Sep 2026.