Description review

Business Development Specialist - Senior

Cummins · Norway · back to the listing

HR standards

54/100

needs work

Title ↔ description

64/100

needs work

Reads as

Sales Representative

100% confident

What this role officially is

commercial sales representative — ESCO, the EU occupation classification

Commercial sales representatives represent a company in selling and providing information on goods and services to businesses and organisations.

Also known as: field sales representative, technical and commercial sales executive, field sales executive, sales and marketing consultant, business development representative, technical and commercial sales representative

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What the listing never says

  • No pay range published. Candidates cannot tell whether applying is worth their time. Pay transparency
  • No location or timezone policy stated, so a candidate cannot tell where they may work from. Scope clarity

The listing, marked up

Nothing in the wording of this listing tripped a check. The scores above still judge how complete and coherent it is.

We are looking for a talented Business Development Manager – Marine to join our team specializing in Sales for our Marine Department at CumminsNorway.

In this role, you will make an impact in the following ways:

• Identify and pursue new business opportunities in high-potential markets to drive growth

• Build and maintain strong relationships with customers across different levels

• Understand customer needs and offer tailored Cummins solutions (standard and customized)

• Effectively position Cummins products against competitors to win business

• Negotiate deals in line with company guidelines while achieving revenue and profit targets

• Collaborate closely with internal teams (e.g., engineering, supply chain, finance) to meet customer requirements

• Track sales performance through CRM systems, ensuring accurate forecasting and pipeline management

• Support and develop the team by mentoring, coaching, and identifying opportunities for improvement

Originally posted on Himalayas

How this was produced

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Deterministic penalty applied to the HR score: 8 points (from 62 before penalties). Reviewed 24 Sep 2026.